Open Poetry #32 |
To Be No One |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
To be no one... To feel the wind pass through me...as if I were not solid beyond the walls of this appearance. Beneath your fingers I would be nothing...a sweep of air so brief in my delight. To your eyes...I would be empty. Having ceased in the hold of my containment. In your arms I would be distance...playing slowly to the limits of your reach. To be no one...and yet - To be this. I would give my everything...and simply disappear. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
made me sad`, know the feeling good write, enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc Good write, enjoyed theread. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A different feel to this write Eric... layers below layers...like a wave almost. Nicely done. TD |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Eric Your words always captivate me. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Eric - OMG.....breathtaking! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*sighs* |
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