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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-05-30 02:34 PM



To be no one...

To feel the wind pass through me...as if I were
not solid beyond the walls of this
appearance.

Beneath your fingers I would be
nothing...a sweep of air so
brief in my delight.

To your eyes...I would be
empty.

Having ceased in the hold of
my containment.

In your arms I would be distance...playing
slowly to the limits of your
reach.

To be no one...and
yet -

To be this.

I would give my everything...and simply
disappear.



© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-05-30 02:47 PM


made me sad`, know the feeling   
good write, enjoyed


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-05-30 02:56 PM


Ericc
Good write, enjoyed theread.

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2004-05-30 03:55 PM


A different feel to this write Eric...
layers below layers...like a wave almost.
Nicely done.
TD

Suetang
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4 posted 2004-05-30 11:13 PM


Hello Eric

Your words always captivate me.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

iliana
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5 posted 2004-05-31 01:12 AM


Eric - OMG.....breathtaking!
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-05-31 02:42 AM


*sighs*
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