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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia 
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She came to me in the night Her needs wanting to be met Longing to be met I was the only one to fulfil them. I couldn't help but admire her curves the way the light plays off them dancing so delicately down the sides highlighting her best features I'm a slave to her needs I can't escape the control I tell myself I shouldn't but I am compelled to do it I pause to for her last instruction "I AM YOUR WEB MISSTRESS YOU MUST" So i clicked ... Please note the button does nothing |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Tee Hee --  SusanThe whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's pretty cool! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Heheheh Enjoyed this very much, thanks for the chuckle  Maree. The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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GlisteningRain Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 103The clouds |
If you're new to poetry...then damn. That was some unique uh....I wanted to curse but realized I couldn't. It was really good. - B |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
hey buddy, is good stuff.. yaknow. LOVED it!!  |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
Thank you for all replying to my poem and yes i'm still new. This is only my 4th poem so i'm a lil green still. |
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