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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2004-05-29 06:08 AM



I can see your hair from here,
waving through the wind.

Eyelashes whipping 'cross
the sky's skin.
Ripping through time.

Freyja
I do know you now
more than ever.


So feline-like creatures
fly.

This is why I
love you.

© Copyright 2004 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
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california
1 posted 2004-05-29 06:11 AM


loved this one


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2 posted 2004-05-29 07:00 AM


Fine writing...ending beautiful...

''Death where is thy sting? Love where is thy glory?'' William Shakespeare.

icebox
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in the shadows
3 posted 2004-05-29 11:08 AM


*GREAT*

(just be careful of Loki)


*grin*


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In your dreams
4 posted 2004-05-29 12:00 PM


Beautiful.
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-05-29 12:39 PM


you are beautiful
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6 posted 2004-05-29 02:44 PM


Whew...!!!

Eric

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USA
7 posted 2004-05-29 03:31 PM


How very special this is!  I found her -- now she has a new fan!   ....jo
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Eternity
8 posted 2004-05-29 03:58 PM


A very beautiful offering to Freyja!
Love, Margherita

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9 posted 2004-05-29 05:47 PM


Just beautiful!

Maree

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~Stevie Nicks~

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10 posted 2004-05-31 08:21 AM


beautifuly, written.
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