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Aimster
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Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2004-05-28 11:18 AM


I felt your love today
Just like so many times before
It lightly touched me in a sweet gentle breeze
Suddenly I didn't feel alone anymore

It seems you always know the times
When I need you more than yesterday
You're always there to show me the rainbow
You chase the pain away

You may be an Angel in the sky
But I carry you deep in my heart
It helps to lessen the burden of losing you
Helps with our premature depart

Your image is all around me
I see you in the deep blue sky
I feel your presence in my soul
You are the tears that I cry

You etched yourself in all my smiles
The very essence of you surrounds me
If I've not told you this before
Your love set me free

I once was a broken spirit
Your kind love though made me whole
Never could anyone understand what you gave to me
I love you heart and soul

I see a dove flying high above
Thank you Mom for everything and more
It's with you I can fly
It's with you that I soar

**Thanks to my Mom, my angel for
everything she did and still continues to do.
You are missed more than you could ever know...
and loved more now than I ever
thought I could love anyone.
From my heart and soul...I thank you!

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

© Copyright 2004 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion
1 posted 2004-05-28 12:26 PM


kinda funny how moms always do that stuff huh...nice write

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-05-28 12:30 PM


mine's been gone for 24 years now and I still feel her today

beautiful gift Amy

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-05-28 03:01 PM


  I too know this, feel this.  Thanks for putting it into lovely words.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2004-05-28 04:46 PM


Beautiful words...James
ParisGrl
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5 posted 2004-05-29 02:10 PM


Amy,

This is very touching......i'm sure your mom misses you too.

~Laura~

garysgirl
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6 posted 2004-05-29 02:27 PM


Amy, this is a beautiful tribute
to your Mother. It's so pretty
and heart-felt. Thanks for sharing
with us,
Hugs,
Ethel

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2004-05-29 11:04 PM


It seems you always know the times
When I need you more than yesterday

How I know that feeling...
Dear Amy, I especially loved your reference to the doves flying,  
reminds me of something I heard long ago.
When we witness a flock of birds taking flight acorss the sky,
it is a sign from God that all is right in heaven.

This is so pretty, and there's no doubt in my mind,
you made your Mama smile~

Hugs Amy~

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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8 posted 2004-05-29 11:08 PM


Heart hugs Amy.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
9 posted 2004-05-30 04:07 AM


Hello Amy

Your words touched me more than you'll ever know.  The tears continue to flow as I can relate so well to your words, particularly today.

"We are all angels with only one wing...
we can fly only by embracing each other"

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla
10 posted 2004-05-30 04:12 AM


wonderful write

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
11 posted 2004-05-31 08:22 AM


thanks to all of you my dear friends.
even though my Mom has been gone for
ten years, there are times I feel her
presence as though she was right beside me.
As always, it's with honor and happiness
that I share her spirit with all of you.
Thank you for reading and for your
beautiful comments. they are appreciated
more than you know!
take care,
amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

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