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Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2004-05-29 05:57 AM

What foolshness did i do?
in summers fragrant meadows
my heart will know my fool ways,
the Yellowhammer will for me cry.

Whispering breeze will laugh and
mock, while i another will have to seek.
Another to bestow my love, more
powerful than ocean's white foamy waves.

Crashing , swirling, surrounding,
on a tidal tumult of tempestuous barbarism.
Breathless, abandoned under the
cloudy veil, on Neptunes element.

Out to sea on calmer waters
my love will carry me, strength
coupled with gentle liquid ringing waves,
soothing mind, heart, soul.

Drifting on the silver reflected sea,
aqua dipped with seabirds crying
gently, flying slowly, crookedly
bent on the warm ocean air.

To an Island of clear sea water.
Paradise will be ours, love to
share, bounties of fruit eaten,to
majestic skies, burning Orange and Cerise.

Lapping waves at midnight under glowing stars,
surf lulled sleep, washing to
dreams of calling Whales and Dolphins,
i hear the Earth sigh and breathe.

Beaching Orca's, gently lift us
back to the ocean, still in our abstract
land of wonder.To the world of
undulating waves, lullabied by Whales.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-05-29 12:58 PM

how descriptive!

You are growing in your verse...and in your heart

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2004-06-03 12:50 PM

Hello Phil

I cannot believe there is only one other response to this beautiful piece of writing.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2004-06-03 07:12 PM

not enough replies.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2004-06-05 04:56 AM

You need a mermaid....Sad poem..but wonderfully expressed and felt~

~ARH

"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968)

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-06-05 05:12 AM

"Lapping waves at midnight under glowing stars,
surf lulled sleep, washing to
dreams of calling Whales and Dolphins,
i hear the Earth sigh and breathe."

Just beautiful!

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