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GlisteningRain
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The clouds

0 posted 2004-05-29 05:33 AM


The haze fits me perfectly

and
shines
the
tree

Between One and two
I climb

and
I
Rhyme

Rivers playing with pine
I take

And
I make

Miasma

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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2004-05-29 05:58 AM


yes.
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california
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cool


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3 posted 2004-05-29 06:09 AM


Very good....
GlisteningRain
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The clouds
4 posted 2004-05-30 05:25 PM


Thank you for your encouragement. ^_^
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