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marcel
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since 2003-03-02
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0 posted 2004-05-28 06:54 PM



Love for Rent

I want to love
But love does not trust me
She has peeked into my past
And weeps for the scattered hearts.

Marcel

© Copyright 2004 keith marcel - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-05-28 07:48 PM


For with every scattered heart remains a part...
Nicely written.
TD

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-05-28 09:29 PM


Ah, the dues paid for a past.  A lot said in few words.  Enjoyed the read.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-05-29 03:42 AM


wow
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4 posted 2004-05-29 03:56 AM


wow my thoughts exactly, those pasts can get you every time. unless love can look past    past.


ethome
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5 posted 2004-05-29 04:05 AM


I know the feeling....Nice write!


Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

GlisteningRain
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The clouds
6 posted 2004-05-29 05:37 AM


You've captured it..if it could be one word.
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