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Open Poetry #32

Love for Rent

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

0 posted 2004-05-28 06:54 PM

Love for Rent

I want to love
But love does not trust me
She has peeked into my past
And weeps for the scattered hearts.

Marcel

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-05-28 07:48 PM

For with every scattered heart remains a part...
Nicely written.
TD

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-05-28 09:29 PM

Ah, the dues paid for a past. A lot said in few words. Enjoyed the read.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-05-29 03:42 AM

wow

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2004-05-29 03:56 AM

wow my thoughts exactly, those pasts can get you every time. unless love can look past past.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2004-05-29 04:05 AM

I know the feeling....Nice write!

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

GlisteningRain
Member

since 2004-05-06

Posts 103
The clouds

6 posted 2004-05-29 05:37 AM

You've captured it..if it could be one word.

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