Open Poetry #32 |
What Else |
choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
What else is there, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poem is especially touching for me at this time. Thank you! EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes at times words are needed to bridge the distance Paul. Well said m'friend. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Your poem is especially touching for me at this time. Thank you! Dear EA, Thank you for sharing your resonance with my poem, it feels really validating ... back ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Yes at times words are needed to bridge the distance Paul. Well said m'friend. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always Dancing with you in the summer rain~ Dear ~E Thank you! I love the intention of this little poem w/ your signature. ~P |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I liked this one |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
above the moon beyond horizon's end the faint but clear sound of the flute of the zenmaster |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
What else is there, but words to bridge the distance past seen and unseen- the moon rises in fullness; faraway hearts beat as one. above the moon beyond horizon's end the faint but clear sound of the flute of the zenmaster or the calling of willows sighing the echo of spring's passing singing us into the oncoming storms the lullaby of swaying branches. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Oh, such dreamy images you offer for my fantasy to play with... ~P or the calling of willows sighing the echo of spring's passing singing us into the oncoming storms the lullaby of swaying branches. In spring's passing, willows sway in the soft breeze in fullness- they echo silent pond ripples; the silence of gathered clouds. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Such ethereal, mystical images you share.... ~P above the moon beyond horizon's end the faint but clear sound of the flute of the zenmaster The flute's rising sound mingles with the cry of gulls drifting off- to where ocean and sky meet; barefoot shadows on the sand. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Lee J. I'm glad you like... ~P |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh this touched my heart |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
So pretty. I liked alot! Tara |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
So much said in this short verse. Good one. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
sigh this touched my heart Aww, Thank you Dixie, I'm glad as your poems truly touch mine...~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
So pretty. I liked alot! Tara Thank you Tara, I am glad you liked... ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
So much said in this short verse. Good one. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” Thank you JL.....Thats a great comment under your signature ~P |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
amazing to say, but words truly can bridge a distance...this was excellent! take care amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
amazing to say, but words truly can bridge a distance...this was excellent! take care amy Thank you Amy, I think that PIP is certainly proof of that bridging worlds, cultures, through a common bond of feelings and often heartfelt words.... ~P |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Paul -- I thoroughly enjoyed your writing and all the posts that followed! What Else?! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
likes this |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Paul -- I thoroughly enjoyed your writing and all the posts that followed! What Else?! Hi ~Jo, Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed.....and the wonderful posts of fellow PIP poets, Yes, so inspiring....~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Hi ~M Thank you....~P |
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