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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the pale one saw snakes in the road before it was a road back when the mountains talked and the tree people didn't have tattoos a water moth thrummed her pillows made ghost face warriors out of songs dressed them in freckle skins and took away their walking shoes at night she floated on still glass the finger band god was a noisy bush with no ears to hear her music she touched the end of dreams shivers make water wrinkle and she loved the waves on black stones like hands shaking bones bare foot to the neck she would run her woman there ________________ Dark |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's so good to read you again... Now...you have an exceptionally good moth wing spirit ghost day... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gawd you are a treat for morning eyes. Hugging you good morning. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark, Now that is dark. LOL Enjoyed |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"shivers make water wrinkle" ohhhhhhh yes...loved that line. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a water moth thrummed her pillows made ghost face warriors out of songs dressed them in freckle skins and took away their walking shoes at night she floated on still glass the finger band god was a noisy bush with no ears to hear her music she touched the end of dreams shivers make water wrinkle and she loved the waves on black stones like hands shaking bones bare foot to the neck she would run her woman there ================================= me thinks you know the moths well... very cool write DS...much to read between the lines.... love the unique imagery and personify of this, very cool indeed.  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "shivers make water wrinkle" Indeed!! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
beautiful picture your words do paint. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Fantastic! M  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I had to read that twice to get a grasp on the theme. Very deep. Juju |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
with no ears to hear her music she touched the end of dreams shivers make water wrinkle and she loved the waves on black stones Your writing is a compliment to the elements, and the forces of nature, Dark Stranger~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
shiver me, in 3D! you never fail to delight me with your unique imagery you stay in the dark too long |
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