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Dot Com Daddy
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Dot Com Daddy |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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This is not meant to be a nice song at all!! I need a dynamite bridge to bring this home and I can't come up with a real good one...HELP!!! My muse took a kick and I can't fully describe this Pr@#K!.... I know this is a real hornet's nest of a topic but I felt it should be written about and maybe it should be third person....I'm not sure... The music for the verses flows like a gem! It's that missing bridge........AAAWWW! You've gone back to Cyber Missin C'mon dear girl I can't get through You better come back to me Virginia, There's nothin home like me for you Come back here to me Virginia I wanna visit you sometime Come back on girl I miss ya This is dot com daddy on the line. You're my sweetheart on the line I keep callin an callin Oh we'll have a good time I'm looking through your windows I'm a prisoner on the line Concert date's nearing I'm a prisoner left behind Dot Com Daddy needs you.. I got two tickets you can't miss it It's the concert you wanna see Please see me callin you Virginia, Come back on and talk to me Why'd you leave so fast what's missin You were there for me each night Come back talk to me Virginia To dot com daddy's cool chat site You're my sweetheart on the line I keep callin an callin Oh we'll have a good time I'm looking through your windows I'm a prisoner on the line Concert date's nearing I'm a prisoner left behind Dot Com Daddy needs you.. ------------------ [This message has been edited by writefortune (edited 05-27-2004).] [This message has been edited by ethome (05-27-2004 04:27 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
all of our muses need a break now and then you'll be okay and back in rare form soon  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
No one ever needs to know All the places we will go Forget your age, forget my wife For I'm entitled to my life... Sorry... my fingers sometimes have minds of their own. *S* You're right... this isn't pretty... but you've certainly written it well! *S* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh, I like it, a lot!!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You've gone back to Cyber Missin C'mon dear girl I can't get through You better come back to me Virginia, There's nothin home like me for you Come back here to me Virginia I wanna visit you sometime Come back on girl I miss ya This is dot com daddy on the line. Did you leave me for that other man the one with diamond rings Did dot com johnny call you up and promise you all kind of things. I really didn't mean it baby I was just fantisizin Did dot com johnny pick you up Honey where are you hidin You're my sweetheart on the line I keep callin an callin Oh we'll have a good time I'm looking through your windows I'm a prisoner on the line Concert date's nearing I'm a prisoner left behind Dot Com Daddy needs you.. Did you leave me for that other man the one with diamond rings Did dot com johnny call you up and promise you all kind of things. I really didn't mean it baby I was just fantisizin Did dot com johnny pick you up Honey where are you hidin I got two tickets you can't miss it It's the concert you wanna see Please see me callin you Virginia, Come back on and talk to me Why'd you leave so fast what's missin You were there for me each night Come back talk to me Virginia To dot com daddy's cool chat site Did you leave me for that other man the one with diamond rings Did dot com johnny call you up and promise you all kind of things. I really didn't mean it baby I was just fantisizin Did dot com johnny pick you up Honey where are you hidin You're my sweetheart on the line I keep callin an callin Oh we'll have a good time I'm looking through your windows I'm a prisoner on the line Concert date's nearing I'm a prisoner left behind Dot Com Daddy needs you.. Did you leave me for that other man the one with diamond rings Did dot com johnny call you up and promise you all kind of things. I really didn't mean it baby I was just fantisizin Did dot com johnny pick you up Honey where are you hidin It is an important topic, for sure.  |
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