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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2004-05-26 11:48 PM



In the times of choosing,
the times of reaching that single elemental  
essential judgement call,
I can not always tell
what is right
from what is wrong;
at times
it seems,
even in my dreams,
there really is no difference at all.

©2004 by icebox

[This message has been edited by icebox (05-27-2004 11:24 PM).]

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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-05-27 12:17 PM


Hear, hear.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-05-27 12:23 PM


And, that may well be, when you are the bridge!  *smile*  I think there are such things as right wrongs.  And, wrong rights.
Saunni
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
3 posted 2004-05-27 01:38 AM


Oh, for sure! You are such a smart man! Sincerely, Sauni.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-05-27 08:40 AM


"at times
it seems,
even in my dreams,
there really is no difference at all."

How very true m'friend...how very true.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
5 posted 2004-05-27 08:45 AM


True enough.

My stupid butt keeps looking though....

Love ya Icy!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
6 posted 2004-05-27 09:02 AM


Oh, that proverbial gray zone!!! It can be somewhat confusing!

Wrong or Right,
Love & Light,
EA

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
7 posted 2004-05-27 12:39 PM


yeah
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
8 posted 2004-05-27 01:40 PM


Up or down, left or right...
Confusing is Boss sometimes.
Good one!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


James_A_Fraser
Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines
9 posted 2004-05-27 03:18 PM


I've found I do the things I do, mainly because I do them -- and it's only later that I understand what they were.



~~J

Pilgrimage
Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
10 posted 2004-05-27 04:49 PM


I so seldom choose to do something consciously, there's no 'reason' involved. I enjoyed your gentle rhyme scheme in this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
11 posted 2004-05-27 06:29 PM


icebox,
Excellent my friend.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
12 posted 2004-05-28 12:04 PM


exactly
1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
13 posted 2004-05-28 03:17 PM


even when i pick right...it turns out all wrong
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