Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
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2004-05-26
12:37 PM
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To the first time I hurt and the last time I cried I stood there and watched as faith and hope died Clutching my secrets well within reach Learning the lessons only pain could teach Trying to live with it all bottled inside I stood there and watched as faith and hope died Through endless nights I've lain by myself Denying the feelings I keep high on a shelf Taking them down, only wanting to feel Staring at wounds that just never heal Putting them back, I silently cried I stood there and watched as faith and hope died
THANK-YOU
Tequilia
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Amanda Seymour
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2004-05-26
12:41 PM
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sometimes that's all you can do
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GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
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2004-05-26
12:52 PM
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Oh wow do I know this one... Way too well. It seems that faith and hope die along with dreams, aspirations, and joy. I hope they can be brought back to life in you, this is a beautiful poem.
Always, AlyssaPoems are made by fools like me, But only God can make a tree. Joyce kilmer
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
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2004-05-26
01:22 PM
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Where've you been, Amanda? Good to see you again. A sad and poignant write, dear. Hope things are well with you.
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Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
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2004-05-26
01:26 PM
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wonderful. i've been there many times before and i gotta tell ya you've captured this well. it's not long and drawn out...almost like a eulogy for faith and hope. and i dig that.
however i've found that faith and hope only die one way... if you kill them.
good luck. thanks for the well penned verse. We are all luminous beings, not merely crude creatures of matter. - Yoda
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Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
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2004-05-26
01:50 PM
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Hello again, i know it has been awhile but i have just been strayed from my flock and now i am back to share myself aswell as be lost in others.
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Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
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2004-07-05
02:35 AM
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thankx everyone for your lovely comments
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