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Time's Hold
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Time's Hold |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I see through the mist of words a painful regret of what isn't yet to be... I wonder if two minds can think alike or does one race ahead leaving the other behind, always trying to catch up. There is comfort in the knowing one way or the other, but agony when stuck between the two. I should know, I am here between the lines of my life, wondering the same. M * inspired by Time Prophet "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*sigh* I can relate here |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Well written, Maureen, and well inspired. Yes, time's hold is something to ponder upon... if one has the time, that is. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i know that agony too, very vivid words of descrption as always here |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Maureen... I can see how you would be inspired by TP's piece. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
awesome write M... this line in particular stood out "I wonder if two minds can think alike or does one race ahead leaving the other behind, always trying to catch up." excellent question...i think sometimes that is the case yes but every once in a while two minds are on the same page, and isnt that a wonderful feeling...your words float across the page and really make someone think! thank you... take care Amy  "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderfully expressed Maureen I am wondering have they gone ahead and left me behind too Hope |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Well done!  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
"M" - I would comment that it was perhaps a dubious inspiration, but a damn good read. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Man, this was soooo good! So very good! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
There is comfort in the knowing one way or the other, but agony when stuck between the two. Amen to that. *S* I like this very much! *S* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Yep! I agree, wonderful write. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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