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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
As another day fades, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely.....your pen has a delicate touch. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
As usual, I am awed by the beauty of your images. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*sigh* beautiful |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
As another day fades, the moon rises over the pines this spring night- though our sleeves may never touch, say "we'll meet on the path of dreams." in our dreams the veil is lifted our first kiss consummated our sleeves wettened |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
As another day fades, the moon rises over the pines this spring night- though our sleeves may never touch, say "we'll meet on the path of dreams." in our dreams the veil is lifted our first kiss consummated our sleeves wettened on tears that stream from stolen glances blinking back the waves of expansive oceans that flow from cheek to lip to dreams to you. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oh, I can feel this -- lovely. Smiles - Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Paul -- the essence of a beautiful and treasured love note!  ....jo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this so very much... *S* For those of us whose sleeves touch too seldom, dream paths are a salvation. *S* Excellent write! *S* |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
like this so very much... *S* For those of us whose sleeves touch too seldom, dream paths are a salvation. *S* Excellent write! *S* Thank you *S* and I very much appreciate your sensitivity of response....  ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
on tears that stream from stolen glances blinking back the waves of expansive oceans that flow from cheek to lip to dreams to you. Dawn, this is so moving that I am speechless to respond....Thank you for your sensitivity, resonance, being... ~P |
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