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Searching in quiet moments. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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Life seems a balance of want and what is A longing to find right and wrong Life too much changing to figure what’s right Positioned where others belong So often the patience does ride in the red But still the relief valve won’t blow Is it worth all the stress and frustration inside? I wonder, but still I don’t know Dieing inside is the goodness of man Who’s finding it hard to exist But onwards do carry the load of a life As days and their quandaries persist Too often the wanting of life long reprieve But nothing will change without act Too often consumed by just how life could be Too gutless to watch it react Caught in a turbine that’s spinning so fast As year after year passes by Dieing each moment the dream that I dream As wants for a change slowly die But right it is right as wrong could be bliss A lifetime is short when complete But long now the hours that pass everyday Tomorrow, might better I meet? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Rick, As always so thought provoking and packed full of wisdom. Your writing always leaves me deep in thought...Thanks for these words. Take care, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Rick, such a wondeful thought provoking write. Excellent indeed....much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good to see your writing again friend I have missed you |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Seymour, great to see your reply, thank you my friend, much appreciated. Amy, thanks for your words and reply, always good to see you here, thank you. Enchantress, good to see you here again, thank for taking the time to reply. Dear Dixie, great to see you here my friend, thanks for the words and the thoughts. To you all my friends, again thank you for your replies, each one is appreciated. Sincerely Rick |
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