Open Poetry #32 |
Leap of Faith |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
they say love is a leap of faith i haven't wanted to jump past failures are like neon warning signs telling me to stay firmly planted on the ground where i know it's safe where i know i'm safe your whats making me believe otherwise i've never felt like this before i'm so scared of being hurt but i'm even more scared that your whats making me forget that i don't want to forget it's the pain i've felt thats kept me from being broken again i believe in you so much, it's making it hard to breathe when i'm around you i'm scared that i'm ok with my heart being broken again if it means being with you for a even just a moment i've never felt this way before they say love is a leap of faith if i jump, will you be there to catch me? |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Excellent! Very moving! I love the honesty here! Thanks so much for sharing this with us! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That's one of the important questions to ask... Enjoyed this very much...good line breaks, falling naturally into scattered thoughts... yes, I enjoyed this very much! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
seems like you gotta keep jumping all the time, not just once |
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