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Tender Rambles
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Tender Rambles |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Gurgling these waters over stone passage to a peace yet known One successful lost; anatomized of fingers crossed A wandering of lineage along the banks as time is lost Serene in gulps of life just break the surface to be seen In wiggle dives the depths; forever arms hold fast in deem The current moves along, creating then a different song More comfortable the souls of old commune of spirits woodland hold Deep cool green that filters sunlight streaks variety of languages she speaks Grown silent on the banks of calm and cross-eyed schools To sweep along the surface serpentine of jewels Grown silently absorbed into the picturesque of sounds The clip of wing and flip of sing song mosey still abounds This overflow of lake light pool to course in stretch And reel imagination with each turn its fetch Copyright Kkh 5/23/04 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Deep cool green that filters sunlight streaks Many beautiful lines in this poem, TD. I was thinking of the sun's streaks this evening through the clouds as I drove... *s M |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ 'To sweep along the surface serpentine of jewels Grown silently absorbed into the picturesque of sounds The clip of wing and flip of sing song mosey still abounds' So richly tender is this ramble~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Such vivid imagery! Wonderful! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Wow! Your words just flow! Especially liked: "Grown silently absorbed into the picturesque of sounds The clip of wing and flip of sing song mosey still abounds" I love your writing. Sadie |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
TD -- you are an artist and I love the hues you paint! ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always in amazement of how you do it |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Serene in gulps of life just break the surface to be seen In wiggle dives the depths; forever arms hold fast in deem The current moves along, creating then a different song Your writing whispers to me, of all things that are the sweetest to me. Thank you for sharing your clear and concise voice. Your poetry is very special, Kathleen. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely writing...James |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wow,i love the way you write it  |
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