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Thirsting your presence......A duet with Tiersdin
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Thirsting your presence......A duet with Tiersdin |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I am awakened, blossoming in unwilling silence resigned though you are dew, I am yet thirsting your presence must I fade before your gentle rain? I am content in lilac repose as you, taste tears of dawn in penance for the night, then seek beyond the languid drops, which tease at lips and call for more. I am falling, over you in sun slaked dram, lest radiance fade from petal’s blush in muted want, unquenched desire of the heart. I tremble in reap of your aurora kiss warming places long held captive in the cool of shade I am in awe of every zephyr sweet caress upon the petiole of me at last, love rains... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Brava Tier and Dunc!! This is WONDERFUL! A beautiful blending of creative phrases. Lovely, lovely... a keeper!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You, two, sing very, very well in harmony!  ....jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 of course I love it! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh gads...Dunc & Tier... I'll be back! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am content in lilac repose as you, taste tears of dawn in penance for the night, then seek beyond the languid drops, which tease at lips and call for more. I am falling, over you in sun slaked dram, lest radiance fade from petal’s blush in muted want, unquenched desire of the heart. I tremble in reap of your aurora kiss warming places long held captive in the cool of shade I am in awe of every zephyr sweet caress upon the petiole of me at last, love rains... =========================== WHOA.... hey lookie...Tiersdin taught Duncan to use big words!!!   I LOVE the vocabulary and phrasing in this... you guys used some very cool terms & images in this. AND???? I see some litterbations too!!!  woo hoo.This also has wonderful assonance to it... reading aloud adds to its pleasures. Very nice blending of ink and verse... (bout time the porch slacker had something on this board.)  Great job you two.  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I was very happy to see this... Happier still, to read it. it is, very well done |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Came back... like I promised... wow. Cannot tell who wrote what, it blends so very well. Kudos, Poets. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
If I don't get back to this (which is likely, all things considered, heh), just wanted to say this is coolishly designed and an intersting melding... both of you did fairly well departing a bit from your "normal". And - lol@JM... big words. heh. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely together |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Thanks ya'll, your time and responses are much appreciated. And thanks Tier for teachin' me all those big words...  |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you all for take a moment to read and comment, it means a lot. Thank you Duncan for taking a chance on me despite my errant ways! *big hugs* ~Tier |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW! how did I miss this beautiful collaboration. You DO sing well together. Glad I caught it. Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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