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James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2004-05-24 02:30 PM

Yes

you don't
ask

would
never
ask

but your
eyes, your
eyes

and I must
answer them
somehow

somehow

I
offer
them the
only word
I own

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-05-24 02:32 PM

Separated, disjointed thoughts,
leaving room enough for the reader
to intersperse a little dialogue
of one's own. The way it should be.
Yes.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-05-24 02:35 PM

but your
eyes, your
eyes

and I must
answer them
somehow

Very nice. I really like this part

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

3 posted 2004-05-24 03:21 PM

Beautifully done! Gets the imagination flowing!

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-05-24 03:27 PM

Jaime~
The title said all I needed to hear~

So little (?) ... SO MUCH !~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-05-24 05:39 PM

Enjoyed the flow of this and its simplity, yet the depth!

....jo

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-05-25 12:58 PM

Nice...James

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2004-05-25 09:42 AM

This touches the very heart of me. *S* I especially love the ending... for giving all you can is giving everything... whatever the question. *S*

Absolutely beautiful work, my friend! *S*

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

8 posted 2004-05-25 05:22 PM

You're a master at this. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-05-26 03:25 AM

I can't say no either

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2004-05-29 10:14 PM

Jamie

Eyes speak another language sometimes....and I think one of the words they know best is a deeper yes.

dingusjr
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

11 posted 2004-06-01 05:25 PM

You don't ask
would never ask.......too bad.
Good stuff, Jamie.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2004-06-01 05:45 PM

OH WOW!!!! I love this!!!!!!!
Big hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2004-06-02 10:49 AM

I'm so glad this came back to the top... once again it touches my heart. *S*

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

14 posted 2004-06-02 11:18 AM

eyes can sometimes open up an entire new world, with a new culture, yet to explore.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

15 posted 2004-06-02 01:52 PM

KEEPIN' THIS !!!!! Wonderful. hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

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