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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
Homeland i like those light discerption right hand and left hand we are the same one sometimes i'm walking along the lakefront you do not know easiness and inadvertence but i dread these are the losing time i passed and i was endued with nothing |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Fine writing... thank you..... Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Enjoyed this very much. Nice to read you.  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Hands, Matching in opposition Undiscerning except in touch Sensual emotion At times, We are hands in walking Along the lakefront You tensely noticing all Senses too blunt In this losing time I felt the passing And was endued with nothing please forgive my rewriting of your work, I do it only to aid in my own understanding of your writing. Hopefully I maintained the flavor and meaning of the writing, But I still do not understand the significance of the title to the poem. Gloom |
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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
Professor Gloom; thanks for your resding i only want to show my feeling,about thw life,and we all live in our country,w\what we can do for it ,and what we got from it ,someyimes i allways losing myself.in my opinion poetry is only the way show my sensation. thank you. |
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