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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Don't you think I wanted you there beneath my skin? Did you think me unafraid-- or did you think I'd call you sin? A prodding of a needle thin just the way it used to be Don't you think I wanted you? slipping just beneath my grin giving me what used t'be... in a double dose of home feathers falling under feet trailing heathers twixt the toes and calling me to blessening as if the motionings of me should grant the waters purity and the tide of one sad eye divides the absolute with this-- just a teaspoon of a toss strained across the green absynthe, dripping melt of one sweet square on my craven tongue? Did you think I'd call you sin? Then you don't know me at all. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hey there, what are you doing up so late tonight besides craving! This was an amazing poem, blazing serenity!  ...jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what an ending! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Karen...WOW! this is going into my library.  MThe clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
yes, Wow from me too! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Don't give many WOW's but you get one for this.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Ser....LOVE the way it ended...or started.  Hugs YOU! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Don't you think I wanted you? slipping just beneath my grin ~~~ feathers falling under feet trailing heathers twixt the toes and calling me to blessening as if the motionings of me should grant the waters purity and the tide of one sad eye divides the absolute with this-- just a teaspoon of a toss strained across the green absynthe, ================================ what I do KNOW is... if you didnt write......that would be the sin.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"in a double dose of home" sometimes what we think is home can be so scary.. amazing. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I've seen the needle, and the damage done... Doggone it Karenity, That's what see here. you get a "WOW" from me too |
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