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Satisfaction Sighs
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Satisfaction Sighs |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Satisfaction Sighs ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Sighing Knowing you hear Each sound within my chest Rising and falling with longing Ever belonging to only you, dear You come to me in loving seek Of that we both desire Satisfaction Sighing~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ummmm, ummmm, ummmmmmmmm ! ! ! Very lovely, Marge!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely Marge...James |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sweet.....could send this in a very personal card some time... think I'll save it in my library and do just that! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
very nice! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very pretty! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Extremely satisfactory for the one addressed, I would say! Very lovely! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are a sweety pie.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so loverly Marge! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl sweetest sister of my heart and singer of my soul’s song, OH my this is just incredibly lovely, I love this, I utterly, utterly, utterly, utterly, love this. Not just that the form is so perfect, only you have the ability to write so well in so many different forms, not just the phrasing is just scrumptious, no its simply exquisite. I should know that it would have had your name appended to it, no one does it like you darling one, absolutely no one  Love’s you muchly, I do! Big hugs, and warm smiles, miss you muchly Mushy  Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds but I can face the future with courage brave and bold Footprints In My Heart Kethry |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If I tried to copy my favorite part, I'd be reposting the poem. *S* This is beautiful, my friend... so very beautiful. *S* |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
My friend you could be writing for Hallmark. Just beautiful ..... Hugs to the girls, Marti If you truly love Nature, you will find |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! This is beautiful. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Wonderfully written and fits the style perfectly. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Marge, This sizzles in a soft way! Glad to see you so happy (and hoping this poems rings true, have a feeling it does)! Corinne |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
The kind of love, I am looking for! |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh ..... (Sighing in satisfaction) You never cease to amaze me, my friend! ~~~Huggers~~~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May I say that your soft and sweet 'sensuosity' had me doing some sighing of my own!  Huggums, EO |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How perfect the rise and fall of this little sigh... Smiles, TD |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
You know what I think of this one, girl. Sigh. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
his is beautiful!! Love ya, Betty |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
In heave of chest, the draft of lover's breath. Then sigh, satisfy. glider |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
True love: in poetry. Great write! JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~Hoping That you all know What a great day it is When you let me share heart sighs Getting such an outstanding reaction From friends that I admire so much On these pages of blue Here I remain Hoping~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Somehow I missed this one, glad I found it-- sigh. Smiles -- Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I'm glad Susan found it too  so I could get a chance to read it!Tara |
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