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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-05-23 11:48 PM


My Heart Is Sincere

"Oh my goodness,
I love that woman."
I don't pretend to be
an expert on love,
but I must confess,
the way it feels
when she is close,
it feels so real,
it feels like love.
I will keep on loving her
as long as my heart
holds her dear,
and I will pray
that I will never
see the day,
when I cannot honestly
say that I love her.
Just as sure as
my heart is sincere.

JamesLee
May23
2004

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iliana
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1 posted 2004-05-23 11:55 PM


James, sounds like you found someone really special!  Good for you!  Lovely writing!
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2 posted 2004-05-23 11:56 PM


JamesMichael~
You romantic marvel you !
Adore this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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3 posted 2004-05-24 12:07 PM


That, sir, is the entire kit....every single thing you need.

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4 posted 2004-05-24 12:53 PM


I like this so very much... So will she. *S*
passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-05-24 12:59 PM


I believe you
Margherita
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6 posted 2004-05-24 01:06 PM


I do not doubt a moment that your heart is sincere today.
Love, Margherita

Susan
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7 posted 2004-05-24 02:46 PM


Truly your heart felt sincerity leaps from the page of this write.  How could a woman not blush with pleasure at such a declaration.

Smiles -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

TerryW
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8 posted 2004-05-24 03:05 PM


Ah, to long for this feeling again myself!

Excellent work!

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Endlessecho
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9 posted 2004-05-24 04:25 PM


I like the ending of the poem. It flowed nicely.  Beautiful heartfelt expressions!
Enchantress
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10 posted 2004-05-24 04:37 PM


Wow!!  She must be really special.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

JL
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11 posted 2004-05-24 05:54 PM


Now you’re talkin’ Way to go!  Keep that heart sincere.

Great one!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


scorpio
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12 posted 2004-05-24 07:01 PM


A most heartfelt and sincere poem James.

believe in what your heart feels...

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