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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This verge... A hand stilled against the motion of the night. Two sides...constant in their touch. We are this verge...at once the sweetest breeze and again the holy object of its caress. There is only this reach. An edge pressed against the flesh of meeting worlds. This verge. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"We are this verge...at once the sweetest breeze and again the holy object of its caress." What a beautiful, complete expression in and of itself! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmmm . . . beautiful. Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are the King of the short powerful ones! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"We are this verge...at once the sweetest breeze and again the holy object of its caress. There is only this reach. An edge pressed against the flesh of meeting worlds. This verge." Oh Eric...this is intensly beautiful. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
eric, so pure with beauty...wonderful expression! Sadie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I read this several times over last night... I think the only word that was left to me was poignant. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Through your inspired words, dear Eric, I feel I am part of this reach, of this verge. I feel the touch of worlds. I feel love. With your divine visions you open new horizons to our perceptions of truth. I love you. Margherita  |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
Some day I will be able to write like you. That is my wish. Kaz |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I so admire your vision and your self expression. This held greater meaning than the first read I took, which left me speechless. Wonderful! TD |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely stunning, Eric. Take care..........Sue I am in motion |
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