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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-05-22 07:47 PM


your so far away
far enough that i can't reach your heart
and i want to
i want to so bad
it's like being next to someone
and not being able to speak to them
not being able to hold them
and tell them the world is a cruel cruel place
and it is..
but i love you,always

you think you don't belong here
but you do,oh god you do..

you'll turn and walk away from me
the second the words leave my mouth..
you are known.

i love you
shouldn't that be all that matters
shouldn't that be enough
if i show you every little peice of myself
will you just throw it across the room
like the others before you did?
or will you treasure it like a love letter
meant only for your eyes heart..


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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-05-22 08:21 PM


This aches.  My heart empathizes.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Michelle_loves_Mike
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2 posted 2004-05-23 10:20 AM


I read this whole thing, and this part realy stuck out.....

"i love you
shouldn't that be all that matters
shouldn't that be enough
if i show you every little peice of myself
will you just throw it across the room
like the others before you did?
or will you treasure it like a love letter
meant only for your eyes heart.."


I hope you don't toss your love too easily, it would be doomed.....sadly, in this imperfect world, love usually isn't enough.....


Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

garysgirl
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3 posted 2004-05-23 10:23 AM


exhale, this aches. Very good writing
of emotions.
Hugs,

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2004-05-23 01:14 PM


Well done!
Beki
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
5 posted 2004-05-23 01:27 PM


"you'll turn and walk away from me
the second the words leave my mouth..
you are known."

I can relate to this - to all of it really - very well sid!

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-05-23 01:29 PM


nice ending there....I love the way your cross words out like that!
sad write but so good

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