Open Poetry #32 |
A Love Letter. |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
your so far away far enough that i can't reach your heart and i want to i want to so bad it's like being next to someone and not being able to speak to them not being able to hold them and tell them the world is a cruel cruel place and it is.. but i love you,always you think you don't belong here but you do,oh god you do.. you'll turn and walk away from me the second the words leave my mouth.. you are known. i love you shouldn't that be all that matters shouldn't that be enough if i show you every little peice of myself will you just throw it across the room like the others before you did? or will you treasure it like a love letter meant only for your |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
This aches. My heart empathizes. Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
I read this whole thing, and this part realy stuck out..... "i love you shouldn't that be all that matters shouldn't that be enough if i show you every little peice of myself will you just throw it across the room like the others before you did? or will you treasure it like a love letter meant only for your eyes heart.." I hope you don't toss your love too easily, it would be doomed.....sadly, in this imperfect world, love usually isn't enough..... Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
exhale, this aches. Very good writing of emotions. Hugs, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well done! |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
"you'll turn and walk away from me the second the words leave my mouth.. you are known." I can relate to this - to all of it really - very well sid! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice ending there....I love the way your cross words out like that! sad write but so good |
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