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Open Poetry #32

Weathered

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-05-21 01:53 PM

Times gone by,
Still I sigh.
I'm rusted and weathered.
Callus to the bone,
Maybe thats why I feel so alone.
I'm rusted and weathered.
The world just won't hear,
Because they live in fear.
I'm rusted and weathered.
Sometimes I feel like giving up the fight,
Because I see no one else in my sight.
I'm rusted and weathered...
Rusted and weathered...
Weathered...

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-05-21 02:43 PM

you are only as you believe you are...life can be so good, we are the ones that make it hard. It is all in how we condition ourselves to see...to believe...and to gravitate towards.

Riviting words...a very sad emotion...written well.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-05-21 06:53 PM

Profound, intense write here Kyle...
Very well presented.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-05-23 02:29 AM

You got your point across strongly -- rusted, weathered, callus -- all harsh words -- hope things get better. I hear the human body regenerates completely every seven years (I think it's kind of like that for our hearts, too) -- maybe this is the sixth year or maybe even 6.75! ......jo

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-05-23 12:21 PM

Come inside where it's warm. Here, I'll hold the door open for you!

I understand this feeling of isolation, but there is understanding and the meeting of hearts within a arms reach, you need only reach.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-05-23 01:42 PM

I know this feeling well

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