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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
It appeared to be a man standing there in the dark room surrounded by everything painted black, blind and seemingly unaware of my prescence, positioned still, waiting, until I flick the switch. But with the sudden brightness he has fled and has left only my vaccuum, drying my shirt. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sometimes the things that frighten us the most really ARE just an illusion. I'm hoping so, anyway.  Enjoyed. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Chuckle. The imagination can really mess with our heads. This was a fun read. Smiles -- Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Interesting write! I'll have to come back to check this out again. Sadie |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Knowing someone who was a victim of child abuse this sent chills up and down. For that person it wasn't a vaccuum. Robert |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Mucho Goodo! You've got the touch...I'm going to look for more of your stuff. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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swatcatpettus Member
since 2004-04-12
Posts 57CA |
U have a case of the Extreme Poetry bug, lol, very well written, i enjoyed this one alot, PS, email me if u can |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Shadows and imagination can make monsters from treadmills,,,wait,,they are monsters,,,,,,uh, well, you can dig it,,lol, I enjoyed your work,,,, Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
amazing how the mind can play tricks on us like this, but scary nonetheless. great write. take care, amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehehe....sorry for laughing but this is cute...and it's happened to me too |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
hehehehe -- for me, it was my treadmill. Great write! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great imagination...loved this write! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
One night when I was about 12 I was home alone, it was around 3 AM. I had been watching some of those murder mystery forensic documentary things on the Discovery channel. I went to go in the hallway and when I opened the door the air transfer flung two other doors shut, plus we had just bought a motion sensor light for the hallway, so it turned the light on too. I didn't watch anymore of those forensic shows for awhile! lol good write. It's scary in the dark! Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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