Open Poetry #32 |
need |
majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
need the most common human emotion, even with all my friends at a party of near hundred, it manages to creep up, the back of my neck into my ear through my head down my throat to my chest and grabs my heart with thin, icy, fingers. I understand the priests now, its not the celibacy, rather the lack of perfume on the pillow beside me, a warm hand behind my head, softness contrasting my hardness, clutter to fill spartan space, transducer: rage, anger, aggression to love; and a resigned sigh ushers in silence. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"I understand the priests now, its not the celibacy, rather the lack of perfume on the pillow beside me," I, too, think sometimes, it's better not to entertain the dreams of what might never be. But only sometimes. More often I think, what the hell else have I got to do? Loved the thoughtfulness here, maj. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh youve written of it so well ...yeah, need, need,need...*sigh* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
not really sure what to say here but wow |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This was a very interesting piece -- I enjoyed your style. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent...James |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Truth here, much truth in an excellent package. Well done! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
sighing with you, understanding that feeling |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
"need" yes you've bundled it all up wonderfully. Most enjoyed. Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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