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Heart Breaks
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Heart Breaks |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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When heart break comes into our life And with it all the pain it brings Causes us agony, pain, strife When heart break comes into our life Feeling as if heart's cut with knife Questions in mind constantly rings When heart break comes into our life And with it all the pain it brings *~* |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
AMEN |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...I agree |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Well said and written...thank you.. Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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Obscurity Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 153In A Melancholic Dream |
Such is life... oh man that's depressing, but moving. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
So true Ethel and often takes ages to heal Hope |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
So true. So true and it does take ages to heal and add a few more. BonBon |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Isn't that the truth? But I suppose Wisdom would tell to open it up again. Not always sure... Sadie |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
May your heart break only as a wave breaks, preserving itself though it is pressed in a new direction, to break again perhaps on some far shore it wouldn't have reached at all if it hadn't been broken here first. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
So very true, Ethel. Lovely writing. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes you said it well, ethel, this is just how it feels |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Sorrow abounds this day. I love the ocean wave analogy in the above reply. Let's believe in its truth. Hugs, Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Wish I could tell you I enjoyed this....I did as poetry, but there's too much hurt in it, to someone I like too much, for that word to be used. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Ethel ... there's nothing worse than a heartbreak! And I'm sure we've all had our share. Great write! Hugs and luvs, Marti If you truly love Nature, you will find |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
All I can say is, you're in my thoughts and prayers and  |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
well said good write Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
James had the most interesting response, one that compliments the poem very well. |
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