Open Poetry #32 |
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Babylon.....walking |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL ![]() |
I'm not sure where this poem came from or where it was going....I had to let it out and shut it off. Babylon….walking In a curtained misty Euphrates morning I tripped the paved ways of deities in temples fated to time, and conquering armies marching drunk with visions obscured by dunes and wind. Temples with inner quarters hidden behind sacrifices of flesh, mostly children… innocent, tasted by worshipers whispering dreams of a hereafter shrouded in celebration of the next Holiday. I stumbled into Holy Rooms commemorating a mother and her son… Nimrod, that great architect of ziggurats copied from Memphis to Cahokia (HA!! Memphis, where we had our own King… glutted with adulation and self-deception not to mention way too many peanut butter sandwiches), who some misguided Priest blessed as a god christening her with eternal maternal divinity. I’m in Babylon walking awestruck by the sheer power of centuries. Robert |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Wow. This poem is rich like the history it describes, and yet the touch of humor was a fun little surprise. Enjoyed. Smiles -- Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Robert I'm not sure I understand this as much as it deserves, but I did find it interesting. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thank you Susan. Martie....not sure I would be willing to reveal what I mean in this poem. Glad you found it interesting! Robert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Hey Robert!!!!! ![]() Very interesting poem. I'm not sure I understand it all either, but I'm still thinking about it. Thanks for the exercise! Don't be a stranger! ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow....this sure left me thinking.... I'm keeping it to read over again later ok? Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Great stuff! Don't worry about where it came from or why. A poet often is simply a vehicle for an awareness that is larger than the individual poet. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thanks Icebox...I have always felt that way. Some poems I think: "where in the world did that come from??" Robert |
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