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Endlessecho
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since 2003-09-05
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I live within myself

0 posted 2004-05-21 11:51 AM



I’ve let go of all the rage
The pain
Sadness
Insanity; Madness

Now, what am I going to write?

I was never much for fluffy clouds.  

Stupid self – realization.


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2004-05-21 12:14 PM


yeah, you and me both
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-05-21 07:57 PM


You look into the beauty of things, even fluffy clouds, a fluffy tree, a fluffy feeling of being free from rage and sorrow and pain.  Fluffy can be fun.  It is, however, more of a challenge.  Hmmmm -- inspired.  A poem about Fluffy

Smiles -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-05-23 02:21 AM


Endlessecho!  Applause!  You just wrote it.  Now you can write about more peace (it's harder though, I think).  
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