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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-05-21 12:31 PM


A Beautiful Love Story
(Eternity)

If I wanted
to love her
and she wanted
to love me,
it would be
a beautiful
love story
that could
last for
eternity.

JamesLee
May19
2004
And I
do.

© Copyright 2004 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2004-05-21 12:45 PM


You loving one another for eternity would most definitely make "A Beautiful Love Story"!

Warm hugs 'n smiles,
Linda

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-05-21 02:47 AM


I think that's more like a fairy tale, but one can always hope
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2004-05-21 06:14 AM


Love IS beautiful if it can last a lifetime...but then you have that lifetime to make love beautiful...

~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

4 posted 2004-05-21 06:18 AM


A fine gentle write james..thank you..

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2004-05-21 04:57 PM


Nice story.  Very nice.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
6 posted 2004-05-21 07:47 PM


It certainally would and it certainally could.  

Smiles -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
7 posted 2004-05-23 03:08 AM


I'll keep my fingers crossed for you, JamesMichael!  This sounds like the beginning of something wonderful!   ...jo
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2004-05-25 12:57 PM


Thank you Earth Angel, passing shadows, Romantic Heart, Goldenrose, JL, Susan and iliana....A love story that is truly possible...I feel like that song...Something Tells Me I'm In For Something Good...James
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