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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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There's no room left yet you are seated wooden and here I lean to catch breath standing no taller than you my expectations are... limitless cottons stitching the escape cut me out and let me take your chair if only.... There is never enough to fill the day to keep you from flaunting your ribbons past the window where someone weeps... There is no revenge and still I pull you back to imagine what it would be like if there were.. when I could not bruise your ego even now. I am weaker than I thought... he could treat me as beauty his own and I would still be yours and my own enemy waving in the background of every photo-still. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
and my own enemy waving in the background.. yes hard hitting words as always and so to the point |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
he could treat me as beauty his own and I would still be yours I think if let him treat you to that, you'd forget those old pictures and the people in them, the old 'him' and the old 'you' |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Do you realize, just how "beautiful" you truly are! It is evidenced in your poetry and your infectious smile, Dear Gem Drop! It is sooo good to read your poetry again and see your sweet, smiling face!  LL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I really did miss you when you were gone |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
oh yeah... nice!  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done ma'am... very nice indeed |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
All the above + excellently done! JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
YES, Yay..thank you..I got a Gemjop fix..fantastic Gem. adding. Maree  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
you take away my breath, Gem.. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Gemma,  It sure is good to see you and your poetry.  Hugs, Ethel Mae |
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