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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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the things we shared were something special still you used them to get his attention the words you say like lies twisted into a great weave of deception of horrid emotions only to protect your own to feel as if you are the positive greatness your lips how they forsaked me when you sweetly kissed me in the morning. your hands how they decived me with your tender false touch of emotions. unedited it and not yet titled Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hugs...it doesn't always work out as we want...James |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
I was wrong,but what a good poem that came out of my assumtions. lesson learnt never assume untill you know lol Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Glad it worked out okay for you. I did fee the emotion of betrayal in this one.  |
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