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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-05-20 01:06 AM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

My life was void of love
Until you came and showed me how
I left my troubles far behind me
And started living here and now

My road seemed long and winding
But you guided me from the start
As you came and took up residence
Within the confines of my heart

There were no colors in my rainbow
And my skies were dull and grey
But you filled my life with color
On the day you came my way

Soon the flowers had more fragrance
And the clouds had a silver lining
My days seemed so much brighter
And like a diamond, I was shining

You filled my heart with love
Soon my heartaches were no more
How I beamed when in your presence
With the smile that I now wore

I felt capable of anything
As your love lifted me high above
You filled my life with happiness
When you came and showed me love

* * *

"Today a new sun rises,
for me; everything lives,
everything is animated,
everything seems to speak
to me of my passion,
everything invites me
to cherish it.The fire
consuming me gives to my
heart, to all the faculties
of my soul, a resilience,
an activity....."

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2004-05-20 02:47 AM


as always...gorgeous!
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-05-20 08:51 AM


Beautiful Sue....very nicely expresed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2004-05-20 08:57 AM


Suetang,
enjoyed

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

4 posted 2004-05-20 01:54 PM


This is so beautiful Sue...great write!

Eric

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-05-20 03:40 PM


I do so enjoy the heartfelt lift reading your work brings -- sigh.  Where do you find such beautiful pictures?

Smiles -- Susan  

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
6 posted 2004-05-20 04:52 PM


Dear Sue, this is so full of harmony, music of and for the heart!
So beautiful!
Love, Margherita

Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
7 posted 2004-05-20 05:00 PM


lovely beautiful poem

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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