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Who [Waka]
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Who [Waka] |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"where might this ship be bound in the wake of unbound hearts?" in travel to the places that cant be reached any other way then by being lost and then finding oneself, again.  this is an absolute pleasure to read and read again...you keep outdoing yourself!  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Who sets this course as foaming waves rise and fall in a trackless sea- where might this ship be bound in the wake of unbound hearts? the ship is mere metaphor; our hearts sail pathless riding the waves past the seeing world, the ship cannot contain them |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhPaul~ I love the beauty of this~ AND ... I can tell I'm ready for nighty-night, when my mind starts singing - Who Waka Doo Waka Doo Waka Doo ! Pardon me for  Got a silly case of the giggle-schmigles~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))>< [email protected] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Paul -- you know I like this one!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
From Muted: in travel to the places that cant be reached any other way then by being lost and then finding oneself, again ~~~~~<@>~~~~~ Travelers meet in the light of one full moon beneath distant skies in losing ourselves; we join in the infinite. ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
From Inked Goddess: Who sets this course as foaming waves rise and fall in a trackless sea- where might this ship be bound in the wake of unbound hearts? the ship is mere metaphor; our hearts sail pathless riding the waves past the seeing world, the ship cannot contain them Riding waves, beyond metaphor and real rising and falling- in-between seen and unseen opening hearts sail freely. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Marge, ...and, I love your silliness....~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Paul -- you know I like this one Of course, ~Jo, you told me! ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
neat write! Thank you Dixie, ~P |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Another beauty from your inspired pen, dear Paul! Greatly enjoyed. I don't know why but now I am singing Rod Stewarts "I am sailing ... to be free".... Love, Margherita |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I like this open ended style -- like it a lot! Your poetry just gets better and better. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
I like this open ended style -- like it a lot! Thank you Rat, glad you like it ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
I don't know why but now I am singing Rod Stewarts "I am sailing ... to be free".... Love, Margherita Thank you Margherita, hmmm nice song, wonderful intentions ~P |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Who sets this course as foaming waves rise and fall in a trackless sea- where might this ship be bound in the wake of unbound hearts? my gosh, this is such a kewl piece of writing. i dabble in tanka occasionally and i wish that i have written this! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Kaile, I do hope that you share your tanka ~~P |
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