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Rainy Days
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Rainy Days |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Rainy Days My heart’s pounding reveals me How else could I explain it, or, it ever be? As a rain shower’s origin maybe, you see, I am for you and always will be: As heat rises pulling dampened life and darkening clouds cumulate moisten rife In tears of passion or in tears of strife Joined into the air aloft where angels fife… In that extent of living we became as one. A life meant to be and never to be undone Living to a fulfillment for two hearts begun Harmony palpating in rhythmic unison… Those rainy days I have woven, and spun as a shy and cloudy day… as a day done and night bringing silence, save the far off rumbling of thunder, where a sprinkling of dreams had begun… There, my heart is showering, in that calm. Drawn up by heat of day, and resting quietly on cool layers of air waiting to share again what I had found, so high above the ground. Awaiting the sprits of lightning to color the darkened sky, twisting its patterns of threaded silver of you and I. Pleading after the storms end to be a crystalloid rainbow. That life for two, many colors of one in rhythmic unison… Rainy days, just one of your many songs… [This message has been edited by JL (05-21-2004 01:17 PM).] |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Not difficult to enjoy a good storm with word play such as this... thank you, Sir. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Awaiting the sprits of lightning to color the darkened sky, twisting its patterns of threaded silver of you and I. Pleading after the storms end to be a crystalloid rainbow. That life for two, many colors of one in rhythmic unison…" ~ I loved that passage!!! Gorgeously passionate and captivating!   EA |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"In that extent of living we became as one. A life meant to be and never to be undone Living to a fulfillment for two hearts begun Harmony palpating in rhythmic unison…" very nice!  storms conjure up such intense feelings...nice analogy |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This was very stirring JL...so very well crafted and expressive. Enjoyed very much. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
JL -- gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous ! ! ! ....jo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this one...and I love slow rainly days.. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
each one of your writings becomes more unveiled with soft sentiments of your warmth and love....extremely beautiful JL...thank you for writing and sharing. Hugs Me |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Such beauty displayed here. Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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