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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-05-18 11:04 PM


it feels like every song
that was ever written
was about you

i'm sorry i wasnt there
to make things better for you
when you needed me the most

i wasn't the same person you know now
i wasn't anything
did you even know i exsisted?

things are different now
i can feel a change in the wind
i can feel a change in my heart

you just don't understand
the way i wish you would
the way i know you can

your whats keeping me from screaming my lungs out
your whats keeping me from crying all the time
i know it doesnt seem like much

i wish i could be that one person
that meant something to you
everything to you

i'm showing you my heart
and telling you that its yours
always..



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1 posted 2004-05-19 12:24 PM


felt this one. hugs for you


iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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2 posted 2004-05-19 12:29 PM


Heartfelt.  
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-05-19 02:30 AM


wow...this is touching...
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2004-05-20 01:13 AM


Hello Chelsea

Your heart shines brilliantly in this beautiful piece of writing.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

GlisteningRain
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since 2004-05-06
Posts 103
The clouds
5 posted 2004-05-21 12:14 PM


Like an angel..
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