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Open Poetry #32

What can be said?

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-05-18 08:39 PM

What can be said
Of the touch of your heart
As it embraces my own
In its tenderness and concern

What can be said
Of the gentle words spoken
Soft and caressing
In their acceptance and welcome

What can be said
Of the affection you inspire
By the passions you share
As you encourage my aspirations

What can be said
Of your soul laid bare
Open and accessible
To cradle my insecurities

What can be said?
Only this . . .
I love you

S.A.T.

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-05-18 09:01 PM

Susan~
Seems you've tenderly said it all~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2004-05-18 10:14 PM

You've said it all~~~

*s
M

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2004-05-18 10:41 PM

Said so much with three little words...
Nicely done.
TD

pictureme
Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

4 posted 2004-05-18 10:45 PM

It seems to me you said it all
in the very last line!
This reminded me of the song.....
"you say it best when you say nothing at all"........do you know the song?
powerful ending says everything!
pictureme :-)

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-05-18 10:50 PM

enjoyed this

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-05-19 01:07 AM

Lovely...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-05-19 02:24 AM

this is precious

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2004-05-19 02:40 AM

Susan -- this was such a sweet poem! Thanks for sharing.

....jo

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2004-05-23 11:41 PM

Revisiting...this soft and tender piece...James

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