Open Poetry #32 |
Disturbed |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Disturbed maybe I was looking in the wrong place for a better place for me past all the things that you see as flaws to step out of the glass circle where I could breathe without an if you give me way too much credit I am not all that disturbed thinking life can be found with happiness in it without it being a fantasy and the dreams I have are not all that far from arms reach it is not too complicated there are things in me not hidden from view at all and in it I am honest and have never left out any of the facts showing plainly my true heart so there are no mysterious secrets maybe I do have wounds known only to me that fill me with understandable fears and my emotions are things I can not hide in my sheer joy or when tears easily fall but maybe what you see as disturbed is that I am unconditional it is the only way that I know how to love and maybe the one that is disturbed is not me at all |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this is so good, Helen... I have had these thoughts at one time M |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Maybe? It looks like a no brainer to me! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
from one emotional girl to another, i understand this very well |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW, that's a good one Helen, I think many of us can relate to those words. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Excellent. To feel is to be, and to be honest in how you feel is live true. Great write. Susan |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"I am unconditional it is the only way that I know how to love" You hit that one right out of the park!!!! |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
a bit of a rant, a bit of a whine, but still kryptonite. your style is to elegant not to be. -majnu |
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Defective Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 73Salisbury NC |
I love this. Nice. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! You know who you are! DOn't let anyone say different! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Helen, I always love the openness and honesty in your writing. Maybe, you are not the one disturbed! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, that's the only way that I know to love, too.... too bad that everybody doesn't love that way, isn't it? Hugs, |
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