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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-05-18 12:39 PM



Swallowing Pride

I try the pick-me-ups:
weeding, gardening, things I love to do
no matter how much they make me sweat.

I try the word to word thoughts to another,
and another, of those who I care about
and those who leave me their words behind.

But even those dear-to-me experiences
can't help the loss I feel when I am in need
of the mood of open say*, when I am weighted down
with a moment's call and a voice telling me
"not today".

First reactions, the beginning fear
of being alone with no comfort,
just pulling those weeds, yanking them,
kicking them into piles, too angry to pick them up yet...

For today is not a "good day"
and she is shutting me out in her pain.


* thank you TD
M



"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2004-05-18 12:41 PM



JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2004-05-18 01:38 PM


Venting is good...

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-05-18 01:53 PM


sometimes people need room to allow the dust to settle...and do not mean to shut anyone out...simply, they need time to think...?  

Many hugs sent your way...

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
4 posted 2004-05-18 03:16 PM


"kicking weeds" -- Been there..... hope it works out.  
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-05-18 03:22 PM


Perhaps she just needs time to be alone with her thoughts.

Heart hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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