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missing whats right |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
my heart so heavy with pain my tears again falling like rain my spirit broken from the words spoken my soul hides from the fears you place inside i try to remain so strong my strength you weaken to replace your wrong i try to understand i want to take your hand why do you only see me as the enemy your hate is strong my love was never wrong missing whats right i dont want your fight i miss the feeling of me someone you allow no one to see so you can go on claiming no wrong while your anger has me singing another sad song  [This message has been edited by MGROVES (05-18-2004 04:01 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I do understand...all I can do is keep praying |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou for understanding  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this hurts |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Marsha, this is a sad song, but so very powerfully written. Very touching outpour of your heart. May the tune change! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ Sadly, this is such a heartfelt emote~ Reach for the strength within ... and use it~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Pain is a teacher...love is a healer... The poet the seeker and speaker of both Hugs, TD |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent. I was in there the whole read. Very powerful write. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you have your own style..that touches *s M |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
And sounds like, misunderstood, as well. Good write and |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thank you all for you kind and thoughtful replies  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I read this three times, trying to find the right words to respond, but not good at this... the ache is strong the you has been suppressed missing what's right, it's wrong sadie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A beautiful flow...James |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou all so much for your support and encouragement |
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