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MGROVES
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0 posted 2004-05-18 03:30 AM





my heart
so heavy with pain
my tears
again falling like rain
my spirit broken
from the words spoken
my soul hides
from the fears you place inside
i try to
remain so strong
my strength
you weaken to replace your wrong
i try
to understand
i want
to take your hand
why do you
only see
me as
the enemy
your hate
is strong
my love
was never wrong
missing
whats right
i dont
want your fight
i miss
the feeling of me
someone you allow
no one to see
so you can go on
claiming no wrong
while your anger
has me singing
another sad song

  

[This message has been edited by MGROVES (05-18-2004 04:01 AM).]

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1 posted 2004-05-18 03:46 AM


I do understand...all I can do is keep praying
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2 posted 2004-05-18 04:04 AM


thankyou  for understanding


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3 posted 2004-05-18 04:24 AM



this hurts

Margherita
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4 posted 2004-05-18 09:28 AM


Dear Marsha, this is a sad song, but so very powerfully written.

Very touching outpour of your heart.

May the tune change!

Love and hugs. Margherita

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5 posted 2004-05-18 09:36 AM


Marsha~
Sadly, this is such a heartfelt emote~
Reach for the strength within ... and use it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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6 posted 2004-05-18 11:43 AM


Pain is a teacher...love is a healer...
The poet the seeker and speaker of both
Hugs,
TD

JL
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7 posted 2004-05-18 12:06 PM


Excellent.  I was in there the whole read.  Very powerful write.

JL

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8 posted 2004-05-18 12:14 PM


you have your own style..that touches

*s
M

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9 posted 2004-05-18 03:34 PM


And sounds like, misunderstood, as well.  Good write and
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10 posted 2004-05-18 04:37 PM


thank you all for you kind and thoughtful replies


          


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11 posted 2004-05-19 12:30 PM


I read this three times, trying to find the right words to respond, but not good at this...

   the ache is strong
   the you has been suppressed
   missing what's right, it's wrong
  
          sadie

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2004-05-19 12:56 PM


A beautiful flow...James
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13 posted 2004-05-29 06:24 AM


thankyou all so much for your support and encouragement


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