Not Laughter But Lighted Smiles (for the Professor Gloom)

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iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

0 posted 2004-05-18 12:38 PM

Once all day,
Once all night
Kindred souls
Shared some light.

Light, you know,
Its spectrums change.
Life you know,
Still remains.

Light and love,
Somewhat the same,
Go on forever,
Though spectrums change.

But Friendship stays
Buried deep
Within the bossom
Of the heep

Of rainbowed dreams
Long slipped away.
Who knows which life
Will someday play?

Who knows which life
Will someday show
Rainbowed smiles
Of kindred souls?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-05-18 04:04 AM

a beautiful gift

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-05-18 04:26 AM

oh, how uplifting!!
what a sweet thing to write to our Prof. Gloom

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-05-18 06:38 AM

thoughtful and caring write for a fellow soul...lovely!

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2004-05-18 07:59 AM

Now I must say
I’m not too fond of the day,
Tend to hide away
Than beneath the burning play.

As for friend in need
I tend to find my black steed
And help indeed
Till challenge is freed

I’m a night knight
Helping from shadowed sight
Avoiding the glare of light
Trying to make right

Thanks for the Kind poetry
It mean much to me

Gloom

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2004-05-18 08:00 AM

uplifting and uplighting
very nice touch on the new mornings coming

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2004-05-18 11:06 AM

What a vivid exchange of light and smiles and wisdom.

Greatly enjoyed this thread, dear Jo!

Love and hugs. Margherita

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2004-05-18 11:47 AM

Understanding is a beacon that never goes dim. Nicely done.
TD

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2004-05-18 12:23 PM

Beautiful poetry, but the last stanza was exceptionally great.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2004-05-18 02:34 PM

He is indeed the night's knight of light. Nicely done.

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

10 posted 2004-05-18 09:35 PM

Nice job, Jo.

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (05-19-2004 01:20 AM).]

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

11 posted 2004-05-18 10:19 PM

Nicely done!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2004-05-19 07:40 PM

Like you say...who knows...James

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

13 posted 2004-05-20 01:36 AM

A warm and a beautiful gift

Precious...

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
Joyce kilmer

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

14 posted 2004-05-20 09:21 AM

Well done!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

15 posted 2004-05-20 09:26 AM

Well, know I've read some of your work I'm utterly sure that anything nice you say about my poems is well, just that you being nice...

I'm in awe..

"And the sun went down, and the stars came out far over the summer sea,
But never a moment ceased the fight of the one and the fifty-three."

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