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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN 
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untitled (just for you) Flames leap around in our eyes, The fire dries the tears And sears them closed again. I burned myself again, Alive again, A life again. Press your lips upon mine So that we may forget our lack of oxygen; The tongues of fire swallow the air. I loved the choking again, A gasp again, "Alas" again. Hold this night inside your sheets And whisper goodnight to me, But stare at our star caught on you pilow. Will you sing softly to me again? You sing again, Scream again. Odd pictures sleep together, Glaring, loving, hating, understanding, And you see my eyes in your bed. I loved being blind, acquired ignorance again, Shut my eyes again, Closed tight again. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Flames leap around in our eyes, The fire dries the tears And sears them closed again. I burned myself again, Alive again, A life again. This carries so much meaning. Always seem to get burnt, but to live again! I liked this! |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
I loved being blind, acquired ignorance again, Shut my eyes again, Closed tight again. i loved those lines passionate write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice write...thanks for sharing |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very interesting  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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