Open Poetry #32 |
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Have You Ever Been In Love? |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
![]() Picture by Alan Ayers * * * Have you felt like you could fly Upon the wings of a white dove As your spirit starts to soar Have you ever been in love? Does he fill each waking moment Every hour of every day Do you listen so intently To everything he has to say? As he whispers words of love Do you feel your head swoon Does your heart skip a beat When he walks into the room? Do you feel like you're in heaven As your feet leave the ground Do you feel your life's been blessed With this special love you've found? Does he treat you like a princess Do you fit like hand in glove Is he all you've ever dreamed of Have you ever been in love? * * * "If I had never met him I would have dreamed him into being" I am in motion |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
*sigh* ![]() Yeah, I have... Beautiful Sue, just beautiful. Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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Michelle_loves_Mike![]() ![]()
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
MMMMMMM, yes, I feel that way every day,,,,,sweet work I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sue...as always...incredibly beautiful. Hope all is well with you and yours. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ringo![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Been there... done that.... would love to add to the T-shirt collection. And I sincerely hope the next time is even half as good as this is. Whenever I feel blue, I start breathing again... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Suetang, Yep. You told it beautifully! Sadie |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Coming back to grab this one for the library. Much appreciated. Sadie |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sue~ ![]() ![]() 'Do you feel your life's been blessed With this special love you've found?' Indeed, I do~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your much appreciated comments. I'm so glad you like my words. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
My you write such great romantic poems with such concise content but so well delivered...This is another fine example. Have a good day Eric |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Eric You always humble me greatly with your words for which I thank you. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* so warm and beautiful penned, beautiful!! Charisma |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes! Yes! Yes! ~ and I did dream him into being! As they say, "Dare to dream"! An absolutely luscious piece of romantic writing!!! To love and romance and more love!!! ![]() Linda |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you ladies for your lovely replies. I know I'm not the only hopeless romantic here at PIP. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Wonderful!!!! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you so much for your comment Kristabell. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
yes yes yes yes yes yes YES! *S* Thank you for the reminder... and the smiles it brought. *S* |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sue, this is beautiful dear friend, I hope you truly are in love, great write, much enjoyed. Sincerely Rick |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh yes, Sue...to all of it. ![]() Hugs, Ethel |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I'm so very glad you all liked my words. Thank you so much for your lovely comments. Take care.........Sue I am in motion |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Suetang -- another one of your masterpieces here -- you've got love down really well! ![]() |
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