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Suetang
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0 posted 2004-05-17 09:17 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

Have you felt like you could fly
Upon the wings of a white dove
As your spirit starts to soar
Have you ever been in love?

Does he fill each waking moment
Every hour of every day
Do you listen so intently
To everything he has to say?

As he whispers words of love
Do you feel your head swoon
Does your heart skip a beat
When he walks into the room?

Do you feel like you're in heaven
As your feet leave the ground
Do you feel your life's been blessed
With this special love you've found?

Does he treat you like a princess
Do you fit like hand in glove
Is he all you've ever dreamed of
Have you ever been in love?

* * *

"If I had never met him
I would have dreamed him into being"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
GG
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1 posted 2004-05-17 09:36 PM


*sigh*

Yeah, I have...
Beautiful Sue, just beautiful.

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
                  Joyce kilmer

Michelle_loves_Mike
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2 posted 2004-05-17 09:37 PM


MMMMMMM, yes, I feel that way every day,,,,,sweet work

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-05-17 09:44 PM


Beautiful Sue...as always...incredibly beautiful.
Hope all is well with you and yours.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Ringo
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4 posted 2004-05-17 09:50 PM


Been there... done that.... would love to add to the T-shirt collection. And I sincerely hope the next time is even half as good as this is.

Whenever I feel blue, I start breathing again...
http://www.cmlb.net/ringo

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5 posted 2004-05-17 10:41 PM


Suetang,
   Yep.  You told it beautifully!
                Sadie

Sadelite
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6 posted 2004-05-17 10:42 PM


Coming back to grab this one for the library.
Much appreciated.
               Sadie

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7 posted 2004-05-17 11:42 PM


Sue~

*sighs*

'Do you feel your life's been blessed
With this special love you've found?'


Indeed, I do~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Suetang
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8 posted 2004-05-17 11:43 PM


Thank you all for your much appreciated comments.  I'm so glad you like my words.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

ethome
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9 posted 2004-05-18 05:45 AM


My you write such great romantic poems with such concise content but so well delivered...This is another fine example.

Have a good day


Eric

Suetang
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10 posted 2004-05-18 05:56 PM


Hello Eric

You always humble me greatly with your words for which I thank you.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Sunshine
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11 posted 2004-05-19 02:33 PM



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Charisma
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12 posted 2004-05-19 03:53 PM


*sigh* so warm and beautiful penned, beautiful!!

Charisma

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13 posted 2004-05-19 04:47 PM


Yes! Yes! Yes!

~ and I did dream him into being! As they say, "Dare to dream"!

An absolutely luscious piece of romantic writing!!!

To love and romance and more love!!!


Linda

Suetang
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14 posted 2004-05-19 06:01 PM


Thank you ladies for your lovely replies.  I know I'm not the only hopeless romantic here at PIP.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Kristabell
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15 posted 2004-05-19 08:52 PM


Wonderful!!!!
Suetang
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16 posted 2004-05-20 12:01 PM


Thank you so much for your comment Kristabell.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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17 posted 2004-05-21 10:52 AM


yes yes yes yes yes yes YES! *S*

Thank you for the reminder... and the smiles it brought. *S*

Rick
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18 posted 2004-05-22 10:11 AM


Dear Sue, this is beautiful dear friend, I hope you truly are in love, great write, much enjoyed.

Sincerely
Rick

garysgirl
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19 posted 2004-05-22 10:17 AM


Oh yes, Sue...to all of it.
Hugs,
Ethel

Suetang
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20 posted 2004-05-22 06:24 PM


I'm so very glad you all liked my words.  Thank you so much for your lovely comments.

Take care.........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

iliana
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21 posted 2004-05-23 03:23 AM


Suetang -- another one of your masterpieces here -- you've got love down really well!   ....jo
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