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Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

0 posted 2004-05-17 07:19 PM

Drizzle tap tap splat
camouflage on moistened cheeks
droplets rolled in tense

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (05-18-2004 12:17 AM).]

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

1 posted 2004-05-17 07:51 PM

Nice play on words.....

~P

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2004-05-17 09:06 PM

You're so good at that word play

I can always come back a third or fourth time and still find more meaning in everything you write...
I love that!
Excellent...

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
Joyce kilmer

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

3 posted 2004-05-17 10:19 PM

Choshi and GG,
Thanks for reading and responding to this little ditty. It seems like when we camp, it always rains-usually more like a torrential rain though. It's always great to know we've survived it!
Glad you found interest in the words.

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

4 posted 2004-05-17 10:54 PM

clever

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-05-17 11:37 PM

SadieLady~
I LIKE this ... and the rainy camping is hard to do~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

6 posted 2004-05-18 12:15 PM

muted and Marge,
Thank you for your sweet comments. Camping? I like it in the rain or snow as well as the sunshine. I know I've roughed it when I've met elements! (That is, if I've got gloves, dry blankets, and rain gear, etc!!!)
Sadie

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-05-18 12:50 PM

Winner!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

8 posted 2004-05-18 04:01 AM

excellent!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2004-05-18 11:19 AM

Oh, I can imagine the scene .... under a tent the emotions flow free, we are nearer somehow to life's truths when we sleep on the ground.
And rain and teardrops are friends ....
Beautiful!
Love and hugs. Margherita

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2004-05-18 11:45 AM

What vivid pictures you emote...sweet water for a thirsty world.
TD

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