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muted
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

0 posted 2004-05-17 10:25 AM





Original Photo by MovesInSilence, Digital enhancements by Muted & MovesInSilence. Title Suggestion by MovesInSilence

I was inspired by a loss of words,
not of my own but belonging
to someone more modestly
attired in silence. ~DMvK

© Copyright 2004 Dawn van Krieken-Smith - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-05-17 12:12 PM


Perfect Dawn...you continue to amaze me with your creative talents.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-05-17 12:14 PM


Beautiful!  
Such magic between the two of you!

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3 posted 2004-05-17 12:44 PM


wow! I'm in awe!
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4 posted 2004-05-17 01:20 PM


amazing... as usual.
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5 posted 2004-05-17 01:28 PM


This is one to enjoy again and again... the perfect melding of image with words... Beautiful work! *S*
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6 posted 2004-05-17 05:28 PM


Whaooo...Sunshine said it, such magic between the two of you...You're an incredible writer Dawn, you're talent is amazing.

Maree  

I'm going to keep this beauty.  


The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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7 posted 2004-05-17 05:31 PM


VERY nicely done.  Excellent imagery
with perfect words to accompany it.

MovesInSilence
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8 posted 2004-05-18 03:43 AM


Bravo buddy

ok so i helped with the photo but the words are yours and they make it worth while.
Loving this poem

Margherita
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9 posted 2004-05-18 11:12 AM


My compliments to both of you beautiful artists.
This is magical and I will keep it.
Love, Margherita

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10 posted 2004-05-18 11:38 AM


What a blending of talents here dear one...
Decadent and insatiable dream warriors...
Love it.
TD

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11 posted 2004-05-18 01:35 PM


Dawn&Crew~
Absotively, posilutely GORGEOUS~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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iliana
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12 posted 2004-05-18 03:23 PM


You are so good!  
Susan
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13 posted 2004-05-18 08:26 PM


Ethereal warriors to seize the night

You write with such delicate beauty, truly enjoyed.

Smiles -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Aenimal
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14 posted 2004-05-19 10:36 PM


reminds me of my grandfather's home in italy, when everyone had fallen asleep i snuck outside and climbed unto the flat roof where i'd lay and stare at the stars for hours. Coming from the bright lights of a big city i'd never seen anything like it, full constellations and clusters. I'd forgotten about that, thanks for reminding me
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