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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-05-17 09:33 AM


Mind finds me with a flashlight of Infinite
Understanding pampers me to a fault
We rush around moment to moment
Striving for an all inclusive Buddha

The wind now lay mesmerized
At our apparitional delight
Quenchless worksheets animate
An all emotive enterprise

Perfection is fleeting constantly
With you, life’s eye’s ease
Audio goals run to our feet
Perfecting the trinity of man

We move from our house into a sudden new change
A transition towards new energy
Right into the heart of pure consciousness
Unlimited shapelessness friendly

In you I find curious desire to know
Enlightenment perceives our destination
I think of ice melting as you take me inside thoughts
Various forms of will-o-wisps become soft garnets

I know not where we go, but opt to imagine
For within a not so far off place sings intellect
Of whatever senses we chose to design
Taking us beyond logical outlines

Loving your integral nature, your ability to hear
Touching with deep awareness, touches everything
Enticing us into a world blooming with personality
Yet to be discovered, yet to be loved freely
A liberating practice of getting to know the birth of a bulb - you

© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-05-17 12:15 PM


"Loving your integral nature, your ability to hear
Touching with deep awareness touches everything
Enticing us into a world blooming with personality
Yet to be discovered, yet to be loved freely
A liberating practice of getting to know the birth of a bulb - you"

Beautiful Lee...and what a fantastic ending!
Your creativity shines in this piece.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Bonnie j
Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
2 posted 2004-05-17 12:24 PM


Hi there girlfriend.
How be ya?
I love to read a poem or a story then close my eyes and conjure up a picture then let the words flow in and out of my mind.
Like your words.
See Ya
Bon-Bon

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-05-17 12:34 PM


"In you I find a curious desire to know
Enlightenment perceives our destination
I think of ice melting as you take me inside thoughts
Various forms of will-o-wisps become soft garnets"


I love the way you feel and think!

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2004-05-17 02:03 PM


You are shinning in this write!  This is very nice Lee J.  You make it look sooooo easy!  You have a very special talent of putting into words what you see, hear, and think about.  You are a wonderful poet.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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