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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-05-15 08:25 PM


We as vine
Enraptured in these arms entwine
To trellis curve
Rejoicing every moan with verve
Meandering
Each touch to turn in urgent cling
As we aglow
To writhe in arch of thrills bestow
Of ripened fruit
Still glistening in dews dilute
Such succulence
Elates of bursting innocence
Tomorrow's vintage wine
From stem to flourish fine
Weaving so divine
We as vine

Copyright Kkh 5/15/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-05-15 09:11 PM


Breathtaking, dear TD!
Love, Margherita

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2 posted 2004-05-15 09:35 PM


Kathleen~
Oh, this is indeed a lovely read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-05-15 10:17 PM


Sometimes words do not suffice to describe the beauty of a poem.  This is such a time.  

Smiles -- Susan

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-05-15 10:19 PM


Your writing continues to astound me...
Expertly penned Kathleen.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 2004-05-15 10:24 PM


I absolutely love the flow and feel of this one
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
6 posted 2004-05-16 01:10 PM


beautifully woven tapestry of intimate joy

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-05-16 01:20 PM


you do have a way with words
JL
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Texas, USA
8 posted 2004-05-17 02:06 PM


Such a wonderful poem.  Really enjoyed this.
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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