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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2004-05-17 07:17 AM


Peripheries domain

The periphery of domain
Cannot shelter of the rain
Each drop an utterance of the wed
That crops the essence of the dead

Dousing spirits of each host
With the embers of the toast
Sewing mantles of refrain
In the dormant of the brain

And lighting like a smelters glow
A warming shelter from the snow
Passing on efficiency
Into a souls deficiency

By way of rhythms changing rhyme
From grime to prime in aging time
Osmotic in a flowing grace
That seems forever in its pace

And I am but a gutters bend
In a process without end

© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-05-17 07:45 AM


indeed a process that will continue throughout the magnificent fibers of time...lovely write and sending you a very Good Morning your way Sy...
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2004-05-17 08:28 AM


And I am but a gutters bend
============================

what you are is me poet of way cool...
could one line's intend be any cooler???

If youre a gutter...only rhyme rain flows.

*ww*

I love you more the further I go ...
before this existence ... you were always here inside of me.

Nelly Furtado


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-05-17 09:19 AM


Wonderful wonderful morning read Sy!
Very much enjoy waking up to you...and your words.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2004-05-17 12:55 PM


always love finding you when I wake up

good afternoon Seymour

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2004-05-17 02:17 PM


A wonderful write... enjoyed the read.
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Sybil
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since 2002-09-12
Posts 73
Midwest
6 posted 2004-05-17 02:19 PM



And I am but a gutter's bend...

~*~

more like a flowing, life-giving river,
I would think.



Always enjoy you, m'friend.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2004-05-17 03:19 PM


LeeJ
Thanks for the lovely. Morning sweety.

JM,
Enjoyed your eMail glad your feeling better.
Will write soon. WWRS


Nancy,
Thank you dear.

passing,
Is that when you wake up? LOL Hugs

JL
Glad you enjoyed, thanks.

Sybil,
You are sweet m'friend, thank you.

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